माझ्या जगाची स्वामिनी !! मीच माझी बंदिनी !! काय या ओंजळीत साठवू ?? जीवनी तृप्त हि मनस्विनी !!
nice poem...slight grammer corrections..1)anane should be anale. 2)bhasate should be bahsale....good work keep it up
nice poem...slight grammer corrections..1)anane should be anale. 2)bhasate should be bahsale....good work keep it up
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